Feedback on my adventure wanted (WFRP or D&D)

[emirikol]

All: I HIGHLY welcome your feedback on the formatted draft of my 2nd fan scenario: THE LONE WOLF. It is specifically for WFRP, but can be for other games.

It is already formatted and includes a map (so it looks pretty). I included 90% of the feedback already received.

I specifically need feedback on the following:

1. DISEASE RULES (Warhammer 3e)
2. Title (the scenario is named after the adventure hook of the same name by Hapimeses (I think that's andrew law right?)
3. Where I should place the monsters in the ship
4. what parts of the ship should be rotted and how bad from the encounter with the nurgle plagueship
5. macguffins
6. hooks by party type
7. plot in general
8. "wants and needs by GM's"
9. the boxed text is rough/incomplete..any thoughts there are welcome too.
10. Grammar/spelling/format

It is here: http://gallery.rptools.net/v/contrib/em ... ?g2_page=2 (AT THE BOTTOM.

Yours in chaos slime,



Jay Hafner